Okay! We’re done! I just had one more scene to do (I cut his letter home since I don’t wanna establish a Doogie Howser pattern).
As an added bonus, I ran through my notes and put up some tenative episode titles on the UE homepage. They may shuffle around a bit, drop out, get additions, etc… but it’s a fun hint at things to come.
Post all feedback on the final draft in this thread. Ignore spelling bugs that a spellchecker would catch, anything else is fair game. I’m especially interested in your take on the characters so far and things that are intriguing to you — stuff you’d like to see more of, things that are really working for you. And things that bore you, on the flipside.