I lived up to my end of the bargain, and got some UE out in return for the lemon someone generously wrote.
The update consists of a revision to the scene after Mallory gets back, and many revisions to the last scene I had written, plus a brand new scene. Basically you’re going to want to re-read UE11. Here you go.
This means I’m gonna be doing UE11 and PR5 simultaneously, so I can’t garuntee great speed… but I’m quite happy. Know why? Because I STILL GOT IT. A little rereading and I’m right back into the groove without any rust, without screwing up my characters. It helps that we just hit a major transition for Meiko and Mallory, so they’re allowed to go beyond their standard patterns a bit — and it helps that Kisei and Lorelei didn’t have much to add in this scene. But I still got it.
And, as a bonus for my LJ readers… here’s the lemon. 18 and up only, please. I’ve decided that I am NOT going to link this or future lemons to the UE main page — these are LJ extras only, for the diehard fans who follow updates. It’s sad but true that Joe Q. Reader may judge me a bit harshly if I officially linked and hosted these (a comment that the anonymous author even notes at the bottom of the fic).
So, relish and enjoy it, folks. It’s quite well written and nicely erotic without being blatant pr0n (not that I have anything against pr0n). I’m a little iffy on some characterization, but that’s okay — that’s what fanfic’s all about, interpreting characters under your own opinions. I like that. Might want to save a copy. If you want to leave the author comments feel free to leave them here.
And leave me comments, too; I wanna make sure the new UE11 is working for folks. Praise or critique, anything is appreciated. ^_^