Thanks for your patience. I’ve been having kind of a strange week and I needed the time away from the project to make sure what I was writing didn’t suck. In return, enjoy the next three scenes, which will take us right up to the start of the finale.
This chapter’s getting ridiculously long, so I added in ‘section headers’ before each major movement of the story. I’m kind of iffy on them, though. What do you think? Does it need them to mark each transition or is one double-length chapter of flowing scenes okay as-is?
I probably have other things I could be talking about in this blog post, but I’m tired. So, story, ‘ereyar. Feedback and reactions welcome.
EDIT: FYI, to come on Wednesday… removing the section headers, and splitting the chapter into lf05 and lf06. Even with the split, both will be large chapters. But it should flow better when divided right at the spot where Gilbert comes up with the plan.