First story update for the new blog! And hoping the new interface won’t cause some commenters to shy away. Although the new shiny may even encourage some new comments. We shall see.
Regardless, this is a pretty beefy story update, with several new scenes telling the entire transition to England and into the next act of the story. I’m having a lot of fun telling “ministories” within scenes… making one encapsulated point, exploring one theme, showing off one side character, etc. It seems to be working well for me.
We’ve hit the point in this chapter where I’m not sure precisely what happens next. I know what GENERALLY happens, but like how sf02’s complete outline was “And then they go find out about the Essence Capacitors and bring home a copy of the spell” my entire outline here is… well, no spoilers, but it’ll be clear by the end.
Enjoy, and thanks for reading. Whaddya think?